Monday, September 30, 2024

The Hard Truth About Plagiarism: What International Students Must Know in American Academia

 

Plagiarism is a concept that can be difficult to grasp for many international students coming from different educational backgrounds. 

While certain cultures may not view the sharing of ideas as a major issue, North American academic culture treats plagiarism with zero tolerance

If you’re an international undergraduate—or even a native student who’s never dealt with strict plagiarism policies before—this blog post is your guide to avoiding plagiarism pitfalls and staying true to the principles of academic integrity.


Plagiarism in American Academia: Why It’s a Big Deal

American universities expect students to produce original work—a concept that many struggle to understand. 

There’s a reason your math teachers always said, “Show your work,” when solving problems. 

The same principle applies in college essays and research papers. 

You’re not just delivering information; you're showing how you think.

As one of my British Literature professors told me, "You are writing essays for me so that I can see the quality of your mind." 

That statement shaped my entire perspective on academic work. 

Your writing is a mirror reflecting how you process information, your creativity, and your ability to engage with complex ideas.

In the U.S., plagiarism isn’t just seen as intellectual laziness—it’s theft of intellectual property

And in case you think it’s no big deal, top universities like Harvard and Yale treat plagiarism as a severe academic offense that can have lifelong consequences

Harvard's plagiarism policy explicitly states that it's a form of “academic dishonesty,” while Yale describes it as “academic theft.”


Common Cultural Misunderstandings

I’ve worked with students from countries where the concept of plagiarism is far more relaxed. 

China and certain Middle Eastern countries, for example, place more value on shared knowledge than the ownership of individual ideas. 

I’ve taught students who see education as a means to an end—a degree and a job—without truly valuing the process of original thinking. 

Some students are just looking for an easy way to hack the system. They’re more interested in grades than in developing their intellectual ability.

That’s where I step in, but sometimes, a little bluntness is necessary. 

Plagiarism isn’t just cheating. 

It reflects poor character and intellectual laziness.

Storytime: A Student's Turning Point

I once had a student from the Middle East who didn’t quite grasp the seriousness of plagiarism. 

So, I used a cultural reference to drive the point home. I reminded him of the Prophet Muhammad’s (PBUH) words in the Hadith

"The most excellent Jihad is the conquest of Self." 

Every time you give in to plagiarism, I told him, you lose that internal battle. 

From that moment, he took academic integrity seriously and began to apply himself to authentic work.


Plagiarism: The Consequences Are Real

Many international students don’t realize that plagiarism can ruin their academic careers

The higher you climb in academia, the harsher the penalties become. 

A student found guilty of plagiarism can face failing grades, academic probation, or even expulsion. And here’s the kicker—these infractions can follow you into your career.

Harvard, Yale, and Princeton make it clear in their plagiarism guidelines that any act of academic dishonesty can have long-term repercussions. 

Princeton’s Honor Code emphasizes that the pursuit of knowledge relies on intellectual honesty, and breaking that trust not only impacts your academic journey but your reputation.


What Can You Do to Avoid Plagiarism?

So, how do you avoid falling into the trap of plagiarism? 

Here are some tips I give to students, especially those new to North American academic expectations:

  1. Understand What Plagiarism Is: It’s not just copying and pasting text from a website. Using someone else’s ideas or even paraphrasing without giving proper credit is still plagiarism. Even self-plagiarism—reusing your own work—can get you in trouble.

  2. Use Citation Tools: Whether you're writing essays, research papers, or lab reports, make sure to cite your sources correctly. Tools like Zotero or Citation Machine can help you stay organized.

  3. Show Your Work: Just like in math class, professors want to see how you came to your conclusions. Keeping a record of your research process and early drafts ensures that your ideas remain your own.

  4. Ask for Help Early: If you’re unsure about whether something constitutes plagiarism, don’t hesitate to ask your professor or a tutor. It’s always better to clarify than make a mistake that could have serious consequences.


Conclusion: Play by the Rules, or Pay the Price

Plagiarism isn't just a minor academic infraction—it’s a breach of trust, character, and intellectual integrity. 

And if you're an international student, it’s critical to understand that the rules in North American academia are different. 

Playing by those rules isn't optional; it’s necessary for your success. 

Avoid plagiarism and use your academic journey to cultivate original, creative thought.

What are you doing to ensure your work is original? 

Are you confident in your ability to cite sources correctly? 

If you have concerns, leave a comment below, or better yet, email me at endgameacademics@gmail.com for a free 45-minute strategy session on mastering academic integrity.

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Don’t Let Anyone Derail Your Dreams: My Journey Through Music and Teaching in Korea

 



Introduction
Ever been told you were crazy for pursuing your dreams? 

That something you wanted was “impossible”?

I’ve been there. And I’m here to tell you: 

Don’t listen to them!

For me, Korea holds a very special place in my heart because it’s where so many dreams—despite the doubters—became reality. 

Here’s how I defied the odds and stayed on course despite all the naysayers.

Chasing Dreams Amid Doubters

For years, friends and family told me, “There’s no way you can make a living playing guitar full-time.” 

I refused to let their doubt derail me. 

Korea became the place where I first experienced living abroad, and where I landed my first international gig as a professional musician

I toured from Busan to the DMZ, entertaining U.S. 8th Army soldiers.

Despite all the obstacles, I made it happen. 🎸

But when my music career wound down, I felt lost. 

That’s when I discovered what truly inspired me: inspiring others

I realized I had a passion for teaching and experiencing foreign cultures. 

At the age of 32, I returned to school to pursue my MA in TESOL, aiming to merge my love of teaching with my fascination for new cultures.

Defying Expectations

Post-9/11, people called me "crazy" for wanting to leave the U.S. But despite the fears of terrorism and the doubts of others, I ventured out. 

Nontraditional students like me weren’t common at the time, but I still graduated Summa Cum Laude from a teachers' college.


Because I didn’t listen to those who doubted me, one of my professors secured a teaching opportunity in Korea where I could gain practical experience while completing my degree. 🌍

Korea: A Place of Growth and Discovery

Korea wasn’t just the place where I fulfilled my music dreams. 

It’s where I developed an incredible range of teaching skills, honed my craft, and taught students from every background.

The deep connections I made with my students and colleagues shaped me not just as a teacher, but as a person. 

I embraced the culture, learned from the people, and discovered a Zen-like balance in my weekend trips to Buddhist temples and hikes in the mountains. 🏞️

I also savored the unforgettable cuisine. 

But more than anything, Korea was where I learned to take bold steps toward my goals, despite all the voices telling me otherwise.

What’s Holding You Back?

Looking back, I don’t know who I’d be—or where I’d be—if I had listened to the doubts of others.

 Korea was transformative because I held onto my dreams, no matter what people said.
So, what’s holding you back? 

What’s distracting you from fulfilling your dreams?

What are you telling yourself, and how are you pushing forward? 

Let me know in the comments. I’d love to hear your story!

Brandon


Thanks for stopping by.

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Why I Teach: From Kindergarten to College-Level Education

 
Here's an Enduring Question that every professional teacher needs to ask

What fuels a lifelong passion for teaching across different educational stages?

In my 20+ years of teaching, whether it’s kindergarteners in South Korea or university students, my passion has remained the same: guiding learners on a journey of growth and discovery. 

Teaching isn't just about transferring knowledge—it's about sparking curiosity and unlocking potential. 

As a teacher, my role is to help students realize their own abilities, whether they're taking their first steps toward literacy or mastering academic English at the college level.


A Blast from My Past Life in Korea

Flashback to when I was teaching kindergarteners at a hagwon (private school) in South Korea. 

One of my favorite projects was called "Our School," a book-making activity where my students explored different parts of the school and learned about the people who made it run. 

For them, it was about practicing penmanship, discovering English, and understanding their world. 

For me, it was an incredible experience of seeing these young learners ignite their passion for reading and writing.

It’s never too early to start loving literacy. 

Watching my students light up when they wrote their names or told their own stories was a reminder of why I teach. 

Unlocking the potential inside every young mind is what drives me, and it’s something I carry with me no matter the age group I’m working with.

As Ryan Holiday wrote in The Obstacle is the Way: “The obstacle in the path becomes the path.” 

This quote, if you haven't noticed by know is practically my motto.... because it has literally taken me around the world to find amazing personal adventures and professional success.

My role as a teacher is to help my students turn challenges into opportunities, whether that’s learning the alphabet or crafting a complex research paper.

Project-Centered Learning: A Philosophy That Spans All Ages

This kindergarten project was just one example of project-based learning that connects academic skills with real-world applications. 

Over the years, I’ve found that when students of any age see the relevance of what they’re learning, they become more engaged. 

The best learning happens when students take ownership of their work and see it as more than just an assignment.

Another favorite and inspiring celebrity I follow is Jordan B. Peterson.  

He often emphasizes that the goal of education is to guide individuals from where they are to where they could be. In my teaching journey, whether with young children or postgraduates, this holds true: learning should be personalized, engaging, and transformative.

Project-centered learning helps bridge the gap between academia and life. 

For my university students, this might look like applying research theories to real-world problems, while for my kindergarteners, it meant connecting their daily experiences with reading and writing.

Teaching Both Ends of the Educational Spectrum

It often surprises people that I’ve taught both kindergarteners and university students, but what they don’t realize is that the common thread is helping learners see the possibilities of where education can take them

Young children need to be shown the joy of discovery, and older students need to be reminded that learning is a lifelong journey.

One of my favorite quotes from Jordan B. Peterson is, "Set your house in perfect order before you criticize the world." 

It resonates with how I approach teaching: 

I believe in helping students get their internal "houses" in order—whether it’s focusing on foundational literacy skills or mastering academic writing. 

That said, teachers absolutely must get their own houses as perfectly as possible over time because of the high stakes of having the futures of other people (or their children's) in their hands.

Understand: Learning is not limited by age or subject, but by how we engage with it.

Teaching kindergarteners helped me rediscover the joy of learning for its own sake, something that I emphasize with my university students as well. 

Whether it’s a five-year-old learning to write their first sentence or a 22-year-old tackling a research thesis, the love of learning should be nurtured at every stage.

At the heart of everything, my calling in life is to transform myself in order to be transforming for others...

...to become a lifelong learner so that I can be a model for others.

It all starts with me.


Conclusion: Why I Teach

What inspires me most about teaching is seeing the process of learning unfold

Whether it’s helping a child write their first book or guiding a college student through a complex essay, the act of learning is deeply personal and transformative. 

My role is to help learners unlock their potential and guide them from where they are to where they want to go. 

As Marcus Aurelius said, “The impediment to action advances action. What stands in the way becomes the way.” 

Again, this is an essential understanding I have to every personal and professional challenge I have met here in the U.S., as well as in South Korea and China.

Education is about overcoming obstacles and using them as stepping stones to growth.


Are you—or your child—ready to embark on this educational journey with me?

Whether you're at the beginning stages of learning or ready to tackle the challenges of higher education, let’s work together to reach your full potential. 

📧 Email me at endgameacademics@gmail.com for a free consultation and let’s start building your path to success.

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Brandon

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 Thanks for stopping by. 

 I empower university students to reach their true potential by mastering their mindset and academic English communication skills while learning to navigate the culture of American academia. 

 If you’re interested in these topics, give me a follow so you can stay up to date with my posts. 

Unlock Your Full Potential: Why Fresh Perspectives on Your College Essay Matter

 



Here's Why Fresh Perspectives Are Essential for College Essays

Ever wondered why professional athletes always seek fresh coaching, no matter how good they are? 

It's because new perspectives push them to reach their full potential. 

The same applies to your college essay. 

By seeking different viewpoints, you’ll polish your essay, eliminate blind spots, and showcase your best self to admissions officers.

Think about this Enduring Question aspiring college students often have

How can external perspectives transform your college essay?

Writing, much like sports, isn’t a solo game. Robert Greene reminds us, “Mastery is not a function of genius or talent. 

It is a function of time and intense focus applied to a particular field of knowledge.” In the essay-writing process, that intense focus comes from seeking out varied feedback.


Step 1: Peer Review – Honest Feedback from Your Teammates

Your peers can offer valuable insights because they’re going through the same process. 

Whether it’s identifying unclear sections or suggesting improvements, peers help you recognize what works—and what doesn’t.

Remember This Elite Performance Metaphor

Think of your classmates, teachers, tutors and your parents as your training partners. 

They push you, spot your weaknesses, and help you fine-tune your "form" in writing.


Step 2: Professional Coaching – Expert Eyes on Your Essay

While peer review is helpful, professional coaching elevates your essay to new heights. 

Coaches can provide expert feedback on storytelling, structure, and narrative flow. 

They help you align your essay with what admissions officers are really looking for—just like a pro trainer would tailor workouts to help you hit peak performance.


Step 3: Self-Critique – Gaining Fresh Perspective by Stepping Back

Sometimes the best way to see improvement is by taking a step back. 

Returning to your essay with fresh eyes after a break allows you to catch errors and make key improvements. 

It’s like reviewing game footage to spot where adjustments need to be made.


Conclusion: 

Like an athlete who grows stronger with new training insights, your essay will only improve with fresh perspectives. 

Embrace peer feedback, coaching, and self-reflection to elevate your writing to the next level.


Brandon

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Avoid These Common College Essay Mistakes and Write Like a Pro

 



Overcoming Common Pitfalls in College Essays

Even the best athletes have areas to improve. 

Likewise, even the most dedicated students can fall into common traps when writing their college essays. 

In this post, we’ll explore the most frequent mistakes students make—and how to avoid them to ensure your essay stands out.

I want you to consider this Enduring Question I see my students and their parents often ask

What are the most common mistakes students make in their college essays, and how can you avoid them?


Mistake 1: Vague Storytelling

Just like an athlete who’s all potential but no precision, vague storytelling won’t make you stand out. Admissions officers don’t want generic; they want specifics. 

Robert Greene writes, “The future belongs to those who learn more skills and combine them in creative ways.” Specific, creative details make your story memorable.

Solution

Provide clear, vivid examples. 

Instead of saying "I’m a leader," describe a moment where your leadership made a tangible impact.


Mistake 2: Lack of Personal Insight

Your essay is not just a list of accomplishments—it’s a chance to reflect on how those accomplishments have shaped you. 

Like athletes reflect on their performance to improve, you need to show personal insight.

Solution

After describing an event, dig deeper. 

Reflect on how it changed your perspective or behavior, showing growth.


Mistake 3: Cliché Phrasing

Clichés are the easy way out, just like cutting corners in training. 

They may feel familiar, but they don’t help you stand out. Admissions officers want fresh, original thinking.

Solution: Replace overused phrases with your own unique voice. 

Instead of saying “I’ve always wanted to help people,” focus on a specific moment that sparked that passion.


Conclusion: 

Avoiding these common pitfalls will set your essay on the path to success. 

Like an elite athlete refining their form, perfecting your essay takes dedication, precision, and a willingness to improve. Stay specific, insightful, and original, and you’ll go far.


 What’s the most common pitfall you’re struggling with in your essay? 

Comment below, and let’s chat. 

Ready for more personalized feedback? 

Email me at endgameacademics@gmail.com for a free 45-minute strategy session!

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Brandon

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Leveling Up Your College Essay: The Power of Feedback

 





The Role of Feedback: How Critique Can Turn a Good College Essay Into a Great One

What's the secret to writing a standout college essay? 

Feedback. 

Just like an elite athlete relies on coaches to refine their technique, you need external perspectives to elevate your essay from good to great. 

Whether it’s a trusted friend, a professional coach, or self-review, constructive criticism plays a pivotal role in the writing process.

How can leveraging constructive feedback improve the quality of your college essay?

In the world of writing, we often resist critique because it exposes our vulnerabilities. 

In fact, much like elite sports-performance training, critique is the training regimen for honing your writing skills.


Step 1: The Benefits of Constructive Criticism

Feedback isn’t judgment; it’s coaching. 

Like a personal trainer pushing you past your limits, feedback shows you where you can strengthen your essay. 

Whether it’s clarity, structure, or flow, critique helps tighten your narrative and sharpen your tone.

Elite Performance Training Metaphor

Think of feedback as resistance training for your mind. 

You need that resistance to build strength and resilience in your writing.

Benefits Include:

  • Improved Clarity: Just as coaches fine-tune an athlete’s form, feedback clarifies your thoughts and ensures the reader fully understands your message.
  • Stronger Structure: Like a well-crafted workout plan, feedback helps you organize your ideas for maximum impact.
  • Enhanced Tone: External readers can help fine-tune your voice, ensuring it resonates with the admissions committee.

Step 2: Where to Get Feedback

Just as elite athletes have different trainers for nutrition, strength, and conditioning, there are multiple avenues for getting essay feedback.

Types of Feedback:

  • Peer Feedback: Classmates understand the stakes and can offer relatable insights.
  • Professional Coaching: Essay coaches, like fitness trainers, offer expert advice to bring out your best.
  • Self-Critique: Taking a break before revising is like a cooldown after an intense workout—giving you perspective to spot weaknesses.

Tip: Always review your essay from multiple angles to maximize its effectiveness.


Step 3: Before-and-After Examples

Sophia, a student I worked with, initially wrote a heartfelt but scattered essay. 

After professional feedback, she refined her narrative, cut the fluff, and emphasized her key achievements. Just as an athlete measures their progress in weightlifting, 

Sophia tracked her essay’s progress through feedback.

Example: After feedback, her essay went from general statements to a clear, impactful story about how her role in her school's environmental club helped her develop leadership skills.


Conclusion:

Feedback transforms essays much like coaching transforms athletic performance. 

Embrace it as a tool to refine your work, strengthen your narrative, and, ultimately, showcase your best self to admissions officers.


Ready to take your essay to the next level? 

Here's Your Call to Action

Comment below with your biggest essay-writing challenge and email me at endgameacademics@gmail.com to schedule your free 45-minute strategy session.  

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Brandon 

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From Resistance to Mastery: How Personalized Coaching Transforms College Essay Writing

 




Introduction:

What’s standing between you and crafting a college essay that truly captures your unique story? 

Is it the looming fear of failure, the never-ending cycle of procrastination, or the overwhelming uncertainty of where to begin?

These obstacles might seem daunting, but I’ve learned from both my own experiences as a writer and coach that every challenge is an opportunity for growth. 

As the Stoic philosopher Marcus Aurelius once said, “The impediment to action advances action. What stands in the way becomes the way.” 

This philosophy has shaped how I approach personalized coaching, helping students reframe obstacles as gateways to success—much like my own journey of overcoming resistance in writing.


Step 1: A Personalized Approach to Overcoming Resistance

Resistance is universal when it comes to creativity and writing. 

Steven Pressfield, in his famous book The War of Art, describes resistance as that invisible force that prevents us from reaching our full potential. 

When coaching students like Aisha, I’ve seen firsthand how resistance—whether it’s fear of failure or perfectionism—blocks progress.

Through personalized coaching, I help students break through that resistance by meeting them where they are. Aisha, for example, came to me unsure of how to express her story authentically in her college essay. 

By taking a tailored approach, we identified the root of her hesitation and worked on strategies to reframe writing as an act of empowerment rather than a burden.

“What stands in the way becomes the way,” said Aurelius. Obstacles, like writer's block, aren’t roadblocks—they’re opportunities to dig deeper and find a more profound, authentic voice.


Step 2: From Fear to Progress—The Growth Mindset in Action

Writing isn’t about achieving perfection, it’s about learning and growing. 

This idea ties directly into Dr. Carol Dweck’s research on the growth mindset, which emphasizes the importance of believing that abilities can be developed through dedication and hard work.

In Aisha’s case, she often felt like her writing wasn’t “good enough.” 

Instead of aiming for a flawless first draft, I encouraged her to shift her mindset:

  "It's not about being perfect, but about getting better." 

Over time, she began to approach her college essay as a process of continuous improvement. 

Like Jordan Peterson says in his book 12 Rules for Life, “Compare yourself to who you were yesterday, not to who someone else is today.” 

This helped Aisha focus on her personal growth rather than comparing her writing to that of her peers.

With this shift in mindset, her fear of failure gradually transformed into confidence.


Step 3: Tailored Strategies for Success

No two students are the same, and that’s why personalized feedback is critical to essay success. 

Each essay I coach is a reflection of the student’s unique experiences and goals. 

Whether it’s overcoming writer’s block, refining tone, or understanding what college admissions officers are looking for, my feedback is tailored to individual needs.

For Aisha, we worked through multiple drafts, focusing not only on crafting her story but also on making her voice shine. I guided her with strategies that went beyond the basics. 

"Compare yourself to who you were yesterday" became our guiding principle, ensuring that she tracked her personal progress rather than worrying about how her work stacked up to others’.

Colleges like Harvard University emphasize that admissions essays should showcase authenticity, growth, and resilience

This is what personalized coaching can do—help students go beyond the superficial and dive deeper into their stories.


Step 4: The Importance of Values and Personal Vision

An often overlooked aspect of writing a powerful college essay is getting clear on your personal values

When I coach students, I encourage them to take time to reflect on what values have come to define them. 

This process not only makes their essays more compelling but also connects them to their authentic selves.

In Aisha’s case, we did a value card sorting exercise to help her identify her top three values: integrity, community service, and lifelong learning

Once she had these values in mind, we revisited her essay draft and connected those values to the story she wanted to tell. 

We aligned her narrative with her passion for social entrepreneurship and her dream of attending a college where she could continue making an impact.


Conclusion: From Resistance to Mastery

In the end, personalized coaching isn’t just about improving a college essay—it’s about personal growth, discovering one’s values, and building a compelling narrative that resonates with admissions officers. 

Through each draft, revision, and breakthrough, students like Aisha not only improve their writing but also gain clarity about their goals and potential.

Your challenges—whether it’s writer’s block, fear of failure, or uncertainty—are stepping stones to success. 

As Marcus Aurelius wisely said, “What stands in the way becomes the way.” 

By the way, this is one of my all-time favorite quotes that has gotten me through all kinds of collegiate and career challenges and an essential understanding that has literally taken me around the world!

It's now something I try to pass on to those I teach and advise.

Personalized coaching can help you turn those challenges into triumphs.  


Are you ready to take your college essay from a task to a triumph? 

Let’s work together to craft a personal narrative that stands out and showcases your strengths.

Email me at endgameacademics@gmail.com to schedule your free 45-minute strategy session. 

Or, you can also follow and contact me through my profile pages at Facebook and LinkedIn.

Let’s unlock your potential!

Brandon



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How to Choose a Compelling College Essay Topic

 


Introduction: Choosing a Topic that Stands Out

The college essay is one of the most critical pieces of your application puzzle. 

It's not just about telling your story—it's about choosing the right story to tell. 

Your essay topic will be the lens through which admissions officers view your experiences, values, and personality. 

So, how do you choose a compelling topic that helps you stand out?

Here’s a guide to help you pick an essay topic that speaks volumes about your personal growth, resilience, and long-term potential. 

Plus, we’ll draw on insights from thought leaders like Robert Greene and Jordan Peterson to elevate your narrative.

1. The Power of a Strong Essay Topic

Your essay topic serves as the foundation of your personal narrative. 

It gives admissions officers insight into who you are, not just as a student but as an individual. 

A strong topic will allow you to communicate your growth, resilience, and the values that shape your future ambitions.

Robert Greene, in his book Mastery, reminds us that “The time that leads to mastery is dependent on the intensity of our focus.” 

In your essay, the topic should be something you can focus on deeply—a part of your life you’ve learned from and that reflects your personal mastery of overcoming challenges.


2. Popular Themes and How to Make Them Unique

Here are some classic essay themes and how you can make them truly yours:

Personal Growth and Resilience

Essays about overcoming challenges are popular, but to stand out:

  • Be Specific: Focus on a particular event that significantly impacted you.
  • Show Growth: Detail how this challenge helped you develop new skills or perspectives.
  • Illustrate Resilience: Share specific examples of how you bounced back and persisted.

Example

Instead of a broad essay on "overcoming adversity," narrow it down to a time you struggled with a specific subject, sought help, and showed perseverance to improve your grades.

Jordan Peterson reminds us:

 "Compare yourself to who you were yesterday, not to who someone else is today." 

Your essay should focus on your personal growth, not a comparison to others.

Academic and Career Aspirations

Writing about future goals is compelling when done right:

  • Link Past and Future: Connect your past experiences with your future aspirations.
  • Show Passion: Explain why you're passionate about your chosen field.
  • Demonstrate Commitment: Highlight steps you’ve already taken towards your goals.

Example

Rather than stating "I want to be a doctor," describe a hands-on volunteer experience that sparked your interest in medicine and how you’ve prepared for this path.


3. Cultural Background and Identity

Your cultural background can be a rich source of content:

  • Share Unique Experiences: Detail how your cultural background has shaped your identity and values.
  • Highlight Contributions: Show how your identity will contribute to the college community.
  • Reflect on Growth: Share how understanding your heritage has helped you grow as a person.

Example:

 Instead of writing broadly about your cultural background, focus on a specific tradition or value that deeply influenced your goals and outlook on life.


4. Impactful Experiences and Volunteering

Volunteering or community service is another great topic, but to make it powerful:

  • Be Detailed: Write about a specific project or moment.
  • Show Impact: Highlight how your work impacted others and how it changed you.
  • Connect to Goals: Link your experience to your academic or career goals.

Example

Write about how you led a community garden project, learned leadership skills, and developed empathy while working with diverse groups.


5. Tips for Choosing the Perfect Topic

  1. Be Authentic: Choose a topic that genuinely reflects who you are. Authenticity always resonates.
  2. Be Specific: Narrow your focus to a specific event or part of your life. Specificity makes your essay vivid and engaging.
  3. Show Growth: Demonstrate how the topic has helped you evolve. Colleges are looking for growth potential.
  4. Connect to the Future: Relate your experiences to your future goals. Show how your past has prepared you for college and beyond.

The Role of Personal Values in Crafting a Strong Narrative

Getting clear on your values is crucial. 

Your values define who you are and what motivates you in life. In your essay, try to highlight those values that guide you, especially when navigating challenges.

I once coached Aisha, a bright Pakistani-American student, who initially struggled with defining the core values that shaped her goals and decisions. 

Through a "value card sort" activity, Aisha identified that empathy, service, and determination were the values that most strongly influenced her work in community outreach. She revised her essay to reflect how these values drove her success and will continue to guide her through college at her dream university.


Conclusion: Make Your Topic Count

Choosing the right topic is the foundation for a standout essay. 

It’s not just about your past experiences, but how those experiences reveal your growth, your values, and your potential to contribute to your future college community.

Famous author Stephen King once said, “If you want to be a writer, you must do two things above all others: read a lot and write a lot.” 

This applies to crafting your college essay—be thoughtful, reflective, and detailed in your writing process.

Make your story memorable. 

Use it to show your unique journey and demonstrate your readiness to take on the challenges and opportunities of college life.

Are you struggling to choose the right essay topic? 

Don’t hesitate to contact me for a free 45-minute strategy session where I’ll help you identify the right topic and direction for your essay. 

Let’s work together to help you stand out in the admissions process.

Email me at endgameacademics@gmail.com

You can also catch and contact me through my LinkedIn and Facebook profiles.


Brandon


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The Power of a Personal Narrative in College Essays

 



Your personal narrative is more than just recounting events—it's the key to making your college essay stand out. 

This is the story that admissions officers are eager to hear: how you’ve grown, overcome challenges, and developed resilience. 

As Marcus Aurelius said, “The impediment to action advances action. What stands in the way becomes the way.” 

Obstacles, when handled with the right mindset, become opportunities for growth, and this is what colleges want to see.

And don't you think those who are trying to figure out if you will make in the highly competitive enviroment at your dream college want to know about you most challenging and transformative moments?

Well, you should!

Princeton highlights the importance of narrative: “We look for applicants who are not only successful but have overcome challenges and grown through the process.”

In this post, we’ll dive into why a deeply engaging personal narrative is crucial to your college essay and how to craft one that highlights your unique strengths.


Enduring Question:

Here's something I want you to think about as you read this post today...

How can my personal story make me stand out among thousands of applicants?

To help you answer this question, let's look at some practical strategies and a real-life example of how I guided Saira, a Pakistani-American student, to craft a superior essay.


Why Personal Narratives Matter

A compelling personal narrative showcases your character and achievements, but it also provides a glimpse into how you handle life’s challenges. 

Admissions officers are looking for essays that reflect:

  • Strength: Show what you're capable of achieving and how your experiences have shaped you.
  • Resilience: Demonstrate how you've bounced back from adversity.
  • Growth: Highlight how you’ve evolved through your experiences.

Showcasing Strengths and Resilience

When Saira, a high school senior from New Jersey, reached out to me, she was feeling overwhelmed. 

Her family had heard about my services through relatives in Iowa, and she was struggling to write a personal essay that stood out in the highly competitive landscape of Ivy League admissions.

Practical Tip 1: Get Clear About Your Values 

Before we even started revising her essay, I asked Saira to complete a Values Card Sort Activity, which helped her identify the core values that drive her decisions and actions. 

This exercise revealed her top three values: community, leadership, and resilience

She realized these values had shaped her work as a local youth activist, advocating for social justice and organizing fundraisers for underprivileged children.

By weaving these values into her personal story, Saira was able to highlight why she wanted to attend the University of Chicago—a school known for its commitment to civic engagement. 

We revised her draft to align her narrative with the university’s mission statement, strengthening her application by showing how her personal values and experiences were in sync with the school’s ethos.


Demonstrating Personal Growth

Personal growth is crucial. 

Admissions officers want to know not just what you’ve been through but how those experiences shaped your future. 

Harvard states, “The essay is your opportunity to stand out. Use it to show how you think, what motivates you, and what you care about."

To help Saira demonstrate her growth, I suggested she reframe the challenges she had faced into stories of perseverance.

Practical Tip 2: Reflect on How Challenges Shape You

Saira’s activism started with a fundraising campaign she led after her own family faced financial struggles. 

Her earlier drafts of the essay focused too much on the events, rather than how they shaped her character. 

We rewrote the narrative to focus on how these experiences built her leadership and problem-solving skills. 

She tied this growth to her desire to study political science and law at UChicago, using a Growth Mindset, inspired by Dr. Carol Dweck, to show how setbacks helped her become more resourceful and tenacious.

Famous Writers on Personal Growth

As Maya Angelou said, "You may not control all the events that happen to you, but you can decide not to be reduced by them." 

This is exactly the message Saira wanted to convey. 

Her struggles didn’t define her; they became the building blocks of her resilience.


Crafting an Authentic Story

Your story must be genuine, and authenticity resonates more than any carefully crafted but hollow narrative. 

With Saira, I emphasized the importance of using her own voice.

Practical Tip 3: Be Authentic and Honest 

Saira initially hesitated to share some of her more personal challenges. 

But I encouraged her to include the story of her family’s financial difficulties, not for sympathy, but because it showed how her values and goals were shaped by real-life adversity. 

This authenticity made her essay stand out.


Using Challenges as Stepping Stones

As Marcus Aurelius said, "What stands in the way becomes the way." 

Your obstacles are not just barriers—they are your path forward. 

Michael Jordan echoed this sentiment when he said, "I’ve failed over and over again in my life, and that is why I succeed." 

Colleges want to know how you’ll face the challenges that come with college life.

Practical Tip 4: Tie Your Challenges to Future Goals 

In Saira’s final essay, she framed her experiences not just as past events but as lessons that prepared her for the challenges of college. 

She explained how her leadership experiences would help her contribute to the University of Chicago’s community, where she planned to engage in local civic projects.


Final Steps and Reflection

Saira’s essay was no longer just a list of accomplishments or a timeline of events. 

It became a narrative about values, resilience, and growth, which demonstrated why she would thrive in college. 

By focusing on her journey, she was able to connect her past challenges to her future aspirations.


Reflection Question:

What are the three most important values that shape who you are today, and how can you use them to craft your personal narrative?


Are you ready to craft your own compelling personal narrative? 

Sign up for a free 45-minute strategy session today with Endgame Academics to see how we can help you refine your essay and increase your chances of college success.

Email me at endgameacademics@gmail.com.  

You can also catch and contact me through my LinkedIn and Facebook profiles.

Brandon

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👨‍🏫 Whether it’s mastering college essays, improving presentations, or developing the mental toughness needed to handle academic pressures, I’m here to guide you every step of the way!

🌟 My coaching doesn’t just stop at academics—I focus on building resilience, productivity strategies, and lifelong learning skills that set your child up for success well beyond the classroom.

➡️ Follow me for tips on mindset growth, academic strategies, and how to thrive in college! 💡

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The Importance of Crafting a Compelling College Essay

 




Crafting a college essay isn’t just about meeting a requirement. It's your opportunity to show admissions officers who you truly are—your unique voice, personal growth, and resilience. 

By integrating wisdom from experts like Carol Dweck, Jordan Peterson, and Steven Pressfield, you can write an essay that stands out from the competition.


Introduction: Your Chance to Shine

Your college essay serves as a window into your character. It highlights your personal growth, your resilience, and how you turn challenges into moments of transformation. Admissions officers want to see more than just a polished resume—they want to understand the person behind the achievements.

One powerful way to frame your essay is by incorporating insights from Carol Dweck’s Growth Mindset, Jordan Peterson’s 12 Rules for Life, and Steven Pressfield’s The War of Art

When you blend the best ideas from these thought leaders, you build an essay that speaks to both your inner strength and intellectual curiosity.


The Growth Mindset: Embrace Challenges

Carol Dweck’s theory of the growth mindset encourages students to see challenges as opportunities to grow. Instead of shying away from difficulties, demonstrate how you have faced them head-on. 

This will show admissions officers your commitment to personal development and how you continually strive to improve.

Example:

Describe a time when you struggled academically but persevered through study and support, eventually mastering the subject. 

Explain how that challenge shaped your approach to learning and problem-solving.


Facing Resistance: Insights from Steven Pressfield

Steven Pressfield, in The War of Art, introduces the idea of “Resistance”—an internal force that stands between you and your creative work. 

Writing an impactful college essay requires confronting this Resistance. 

You may experience self-doubt, procrastination, or fear of failure, but pushing through these moments defines your success.

Example:

Share a personal story where you faced resistance while working on a major project or extracurricular activity. 

How did you overcome internal doubt to accomplish your goal?

Tip: Use Pressfield’s metaphor of turning pro—taking your essay seriously and committing to excellence, even when it’s uncomfortable.


Responsibility and Personal Growth: Insights from Jordan Peterson

In his book 12 Rules for Life, Jordan Peterson emphasizes personal responsibility. 

His advice, such as “Stand up straight with your shoulders back” and “Compare yourself to who you were yesterday, not who someone else is today,” underscores the value of taking ownership of your life and constantly improving. 

Admissions officers want to see that you have taken responsibility for your personal growth.

Example:

Write about a leadership role you took on, detailing the responsibilities you managed and the personal growth you experienced. 

Show how this experience has prepared you for the challenges of college life.


Embrace Your Core Values

It's also essential to clarify your core values—the principles that guide you and shape your decision-making. 

Knowing these values can help you craft a personal narrative that feels authentic and compelling. 

Consider how your values have played a role in shaping your identity and how they will help you overcome the challenges of college life.

Nikhil’s Story: Nikhil, an aspiring social entrepreneur, was initially focused on recounting his accomplishments—his impressive work with political leaders, charities, and social initiatives. 

However, his essay lacked a personal narrative that tied these achievements to his inner motivations and vision for the future.

I encouraged Nikhil to do a value card sort activity—a reflective exercise to identify his top 3 core values. 

Through this, Nikhil discovered that community, leadership, and resilience were the guiding forces behind his work. 

He then revised his essay to reflect how these values shaped his past decisions and how they would help him succeed at the University of Chicago’s social entrepreneurship program.


Practical Tips for Crafting Superior Admissions Essays

  1. Start with a Strong Introduction: Capture the reader’s attention by sharing a significant personal moment that highlights your resilience.

  2. Be Authentic: Admissions officers appreciate genuine writing. Share your experiences honestly and use your own voice.

  3. Show, Don’t Just Tell: Instead of simply stating “I am resilient,” illustrate it with an example of how you overcame a significant challenge.

  4. Highlight Growth: Focus on how challenges have helped you grow. What did you learn? How have these experiences prepared you for college?

  5. End with Reflection: Conclude your essay by reflecting on your journey. Share your hopes for the future and how you plan to continue growing and learning in college.


Conclusion: Your Path to Success

In conclusion, crafting a compelling essay isn’t just about recounting events—it’s about sharing your personal narrative

By drawing on insights from Carol Dweck, Jordan Peterson, and Steven Pressfield, you can frame your experiences in a way that shows personal growth, resilience, and commitment to overcoming challenges.

Reflect on your journey. 

Embrace your story. 

Show admissions officers who you are and who you aspire to become.


Have you identified your core values yet? 

How can they help shape your college essay? 

Comment below and share your thoughts.

If you’re looking for personalized support in crafting an outstanding essay, sign up for a free 45-minute strategy session with Endgame Academics today! 

Together, we’ll help you unlock your potential and create a college essay that truly shines.

Brandon

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Overcoming Imposter Syndrome: How to Turn Your Fears Into Fuel

 



Introduction: Understanding Imposter Syndrome in Academia

Starting a thesis or dissertation is a daunting challenge for many postgraduate and Ph.D. students. Similarly, undergraduate freshmen often feel out of place, wondering if they truly belong in college. The common thread between these two groups? Imposter syndrome—the nagging belief that you’re not good enough to be where you are, and that it’s only a matter of time before you’re “found out” as a fraud.

In this blog, we’ll explore how to overcome imposter syndrome whether you're a first-year undergraduate student or a Ph.D. candidate and learn how to turn your fears into fuel for academic success.


What is Imposter Syndrome?

Imposter syndrome is the persistent feeling that you don’t deserve your achievements or your position. You might feel like you’ve fooled others into thinking you're capable, but deep down, you believe you aren’t. This psychological phenomenon can affect anyone, from freshmen stepping onto campus for the first time to seasoned Ph.D. students embarking on thesis work.


The Freshman Experience: Battling Imposter Syndrome in Your First Year

As a college freshman, it’s easy to feel overwhelmed. You're suddenly in a new environment, surrounded by students who seem smarter, more experienced, or better prepared. Thoughts like, "Did they make a mistake admitting me?" or "Everyone else knows what they’re doing except me" can weigh you down. 😰

However, it’s important to realize that most students feel the same way. Even if no one talks about it, imposter syndrome is common in the early stages of college life. Here’s how you can overcome it:

1. Normalize the Feeling

Understand that imposter syndrome is normal, especially during transitions like starting college. Everyone has moments of self-doubt, but they don’t define your ability to succeed. 🌟

2. Ask for Help

Don’t be afraid to reach out to professors, advisors, or fellow students. Seeking help doesn’t mean you’re not capable—it’s a strength. Building connections will help you realize you belong here.

3. Celebrate Small Wins

Take note of small victories: acing an assignment, participating in a class discussion, or even making a new friend. These moments are proof of your growth and competence.


The Ph.D. Experience: Turning Thesis Fears into Motivation

Let’s shift to the postgraduate/Ph.D. experience. Writing a thesis or dissertation can trigger intense imposter syndrome. One of my students, Dana, was the first in her family to attend college and was overwhelmed by the idea of starting her Ph.D. dissertation. She constantly doubted her abilities, believing she wasn’t good enough for the program.

I helped Dana shift her mindset with a valuable lesson from the Stoic philosopher Seneca:
“We suffer more often in imagination than in reality.”

Dana’s imagined fears of failure were holding her back. Once she realized these fears weren’t based in reality, she began taking small, manageable steps forward, eventually completing her dissertation with confidence. 🎓


How to Overcome Imposter Syndrome at Any Level

Whether you're a freshman or a Ph.D. student, the following strategies will help you tackle imposter syndrome:

1. Separate Fear from Reality

Ask yourself: Are my fears based on reality, or are they just imagined worst-case scenarios? More often than not, our fears are unrealistic. Recognizing this empowers you to move forward.

2. Take Small, Consistent Steps

Don’t let the size of the task paralyze you. Break your goals down into small, manageable steps. This builds momentum and makes large projects feel less overwhelming. ✍️

3. Seek Support

Connect with mentors, professors, or academic advisors who can offer guidance and encouragement. You don’t have to go through this alone. Your academic community is there to help you.


Conclusion: Transforming Your Imposter Syndrome into Success

Imposter syndrome is a common experience for both undergraduates and postgraduates. By normalizing your feelings, taking small steps, and seeking support, you can turn your fears into fuel for academic success. 💯



Have you experienced imposter syndrome? How did you overcome it? Let me know in the comments, or reach out if you’d like advice on managing these feelings! 💬👇


Brandon

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