Overcoming Common Pitfalls in College Essays
Even the best athletes have areas to improve.
Likewise, even the most dedicated students can fall into common traps when writing their college essays.
In this post, we’ll explore the most frequent mistakes students make—and how to avoid them to ensure your essay stands out.
I want you to consider this Enduring Question I see my students and their parents often ask:
What are the most common mistakes students make in their college essays, and how can you avoid them?
Mistake 1: Vague Storytelling
Just like an athlete who’s all potential but no precision, vague storytelling won’t make you stand out. Admissions officers don’t want generic; they want specifics.
Robert Greene writes, “The future belongs to those who learn more skills and combine them in creative ways.” Specific, creative details make your story memorable.
Solution:
Provide clear, vivid examples.
Instead of saying "I’m a leader," describe a moment where your leadership made a tangible impact.
Mistake 2: Lack of Personal Insight
Your essay is not just a list of accomplishments—it’s a chance to reflect on how those accomplishments have shaped you.
Like athletes reflect on their performance to improve, you need to show personal insight.
Solution:
After describing an event, dig deeper.
Reflect on how it changed your perspective or behavior, showing growth.
Mistake 3: Cliché Phrasing
Clichés are the easy way out, just like cutting corners in training.
They may feel familiar, but they don’t help you stand out. Admissions officers want fresh, original thinking.
Solution: Replace overused phrases with your own unique voice.
Instead of saying “I’ve always wanted to help people,” focus on a specific moment that sparked that passion.
Conclusion:
Avoiding these common pitfalls will set your essay on the path to success.
Like an elite athlete refining their form, perfecting your essay takes dedication, precision, and a willingness to improve. Stay specific, insightful, and original, and you’ll go far.
What’s the most common pitfall you’re struggling with in your essay?
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