Introduction:
What makes your college essay truly stand out?
Beyond your GPA and extracurriculars, it's your personal narrative that admissions officers remember.
Crafting a powerful story, woven with your core values, not only distinguishes your essay but also conveys your potential to thrive in college.
Today, we'll explore how incorporating your core values and demonstrating resilience can elevate your personal narrative.
We'll also share the story of Nikhil, an aspiring social entrepreneur, who revised his essay to reflect his core values and unique journey.
EThe Importance of Personal Narrative in College Essays:
Your personal narrative does more than recount past experiences—it tells the admissions committee who you are, what values guide you, and how you've learned from challenges.
A strong narrative should:
- Highlight Your Strengths: Showcase how your core values have shaped your personal and academic achievements.
- Demonstrate Resilience: Share stories that illustrate how you’ve overcome challenges, showing admissions officers you won’t give up easily.
- Show Growth Through Challenges: Explain how difficult experiences have contributed to your personal growth, both academically and emotionally.
Embracing Challenges and Growth:
As Marcus Aurelius said, “What stands in the way becomes the way.”
This Stoic philosophy reminds us that challenges are not barriers but pathways to growth.
The same is true in the college admissions process.
Your essay should reflect how you've turned obstacles into opportunities to grow.
Take Nikhil’s story:
He was a talented social entrepreneur who had worked with local and national politicians to drive change in his community.
Yet, his college essay didn’t fully communicate his "why"—the values that drove him or how his past experiences would shape his future.
By identifying and clarifying his core values, Nikhil was able to revise his essay to reflect his growth and vision.
Infusing Your Core Values Into Your Narrative:
One powerful exercise I recommend to students like Nikhil is the Value Card Sort Activity.
This exercise helps you identify your top three core values by sorting and ranking a list of values. Nikhil discovered that his top values were integrity, compassion, and ambition.
Once he identified these, I advised him to revisit the Common App essay prompts and those from his target school—the University of Chicago.
By reflecting on his personal experiences and tying them to his core values, he was able to craft a narrative that showed how his values shaped his entrepreneurial journey and how they would continue to guide him through the challenges of college.
Positive Psychology and Growth Mindset:
Dr. Carol Dweck’s growth mindset research offers a valuable perspective: students who see challenges as opportunities to grow are more likely to persist and succeed. In your college essay, demonstrate this mindset by showing how your core values have helped you grow through adversity.
Nikhil’s Essay Transformation:
Nikhil revised his rough draft to emphasize how integrity, compassion, and ambition shaped his approach to social entrepreneurship. He also drew connections between his values and the University of Chicago’s mission and vision, specifically the finance and business programs he hoped to join.
By tying his values to his future goals, Nikhil painted a clear picture of why he belonged at his dream school and how he would contribute to the university community.
Tips for Writing a Strong Personal Narrative:
Identify Your Core Values: Clarify the values that define who you are. These should guide your narrative.
Start with a Strong Introduction: Open with a defining moment that illustrates your resilience and core values.
Be Authentic: Write in your own voice. Authenticity resonates deeply with readers.
Show, Don’t Tell: Use specific stories to illustrate your values in action.
Highlight Growth: Focus on how your values have helped you grow through challenges.
End with Reflection: Reflect on how your experiences and values have prepared you for success in college and beyond.
Conclusion:
Your personal narrative is your opportunity to communicate your deepest values and showcase how they will guide you through the journey of college.
As Marcus Aurelius reminds us, “What stands in the way becomes the way.” Embrace your challenges and use them to tell your story of growth, resilience, and vision.
Here are the takeaways I hope you will consider as you consider how you will write your personal narrative essays so you can get into the college of your dreams....
Essential Understanding:
Your personal narrative is a reflection of your core values and a demonstration of how those values will guide you through the challenges and opportunities in college.
Enduring Question:
How do your values shape your personal narrative, and how can you use them to communicate your potential for success in college?
Have you identified your core values yet?
How can they help shape your college essay?
Comment below and share your thoughts.
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Brandon
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