Introduction:
What makes a college essay truly stand out?
Is it the topic, the writing style, or something more profound?
The key often lies in personalized feedback.
The right critique can elevate an essay, refining its message and enhancing its impact.
As the famous writer George Orwell once said, “Good writing is like a windowpane.”
Feedback is what ensures that your windowpane is clear, allowing your unique story to shine through.
Let’s explore how personalized coaching and targeted feedback can transform a good essay into an exceptional one.
Breaking Through Resistance: The First Step
Many students hesitate at the start of the essay-writing process. Steven Pressfield, in The War of Art, calls this inner force "resistance"—the very thing that holds us back from creating our best work.
This is where personalized coaching comes in. It helps students break through that initial resistance and move forward.
Take Aisha, one of my students, for example.
She had immense potential but struggled to express it in her writing.
Through personalized feedback, we worked on finding her authentic voice.
By addressing her fears and refining her drafts, Aisha’s essay transformed from ordinary to extraordinary.
As Anne Lamott famously said, “Almost all good writing begins with terrible first efforts.”
The key is moving beyond that first draft—and personalized coaching provides the insights to do just that.
Using Feedback for Personal Growth
Jordan Peterson’s principle of "compare yourself to who you were yesterday, not to who someone else is today," applies perfectly to essay writing.
The goal isn’t to start with perfection but to improve with each draft.
Constructive feedback is central to this growth process:
- Clarity and Focus: Personalized coaching helps students clarify their narrative. One of my students, Nikhil, struggled with a broad essay topic. Through feedback, we narrowed down his focus to his passion for social entrepreneurship, allowing his essay to express his authentic self.
- Consistency: Effective feedback ensures that your essay maintains a unified tone and message from start to finish. We worked on making sure every paragraph in Nikhil’s essay aligned with his core theme.
Feedback is not about pointing out mistakes but about helping you refine your essay into the best version of itself.
As William Zinsser said, “Writing improves in direct ratio to the number of things we can keep out of it.”
Tailored Strategies for Essay Success
No two essays—or students—are the same. Personalized feedback helps address each student’s unique needs and challenges.
Whether it’s tackling a confusing prompt or overcoming writer’s block, coaching provides the tailored strategies needed for success.
Top universities like Harvard emphasize the importance of a well-crafted narrative in their admissions process.
Personalized feedback helps you achieve that by identifying areas of improvement and suggesting actionable changes.
Pro Tip: Remember, revision is more than just fixing grammar or spelling errors.
It’s about ensuring that your essay tells the story you want to tell.
Coaching can provide the insight you need to craft an essay that reflects your unique journey and aspirations.
The Power of Revision: Before and After
To truly understand the power of feedback, let’s consider Aisha’s essay.
Before receiving feedback, her essay was filled with vague generalizations.
After personalized coaching, she was able to incorporate personal insights, vivid storytelling, and a cohesive narrative that captured her passion for learning.
This is what feedback does—it transforms an essay from a rough draft into a polished piece that admissions officers won’t forget.
Conclusion: The Road to Mastery
Marcus Aurelius once said, “What stands in the way becomes the way.”
Just as obstacles in life help us grow, the challenges of writing a college essay can lead to greater clarity and self-expression.
Personalized feedback is the key to pushing through these obstacles and refining your story into something truly exceptional.
Your college essay is your chance to stand out.
Personalized coaching helps ensure that you don’t miss that opportunity.
Ready to take your college essay to the next level?
Contact me at Endgame Academics for a free 45-minute strategy session, and let’s work together to turn your essay into a standout piece that reflects your strengths, growth, and potential.
Brandon
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